My awesome nartive writing

Hey blogger,
We are learning to do narrative writing. We got to chose a picture from pobble. Hope you like this.
Please write a comment if any of my words are wrong.

My awesome weekend recount

Hey Blogger,
We had to write a weekend recount. This is my one it is about my friends coming around.
This is my screen shot about it. I had a friend around and then the next day i had my cousin.
Can you see my friends name in the first paragraph?

The old movie theata (on repeat)

Hey Blogger! We were learning about narrative writing. We are also learning about body words. There are heaps of body words so I will explain one. Alliteration. for example you repeat the same letter over and over 3 times. I will tell you another. Noun. It is a naming word like cat. 

I chose to write about this pitcher because I like movies. My main character was Simon. The setting was at a building site. 

Can you please tell me if I spelled words wrong?  

My water play writing

Hey bloogers!,
This is my writing about water play. Can you see my body words?

NEW LEGO SET

This is what happened in the holodays. I got a new space lego set. hope you like what i wrote about!

FIZZY DRINKS

Fizzy drinks on Biteable. This is a biteable of FIZZY drinks. hope you like it!
I will tell you about different types of ginger beers and how Coca Cola is the most popular fizzy drink.

fizzy

my playground

So you start from the top.

Perswading.

Do you think Mr Norman would say yes.

MY HOLODAYS T3W1

broken phone

i tride to deskribe my writing of brokin phone.

Character Description

I tried to deskribe my desripshons by, what they think, what they do, what they are, what they like.