Hey Blogger,
I am a student at St Bernadette’s School.. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Tuesday, December 3, 2019
My awesome nartive writing
Hey blogger,
We are learning to do narrative writing. We got to chose a picture from pobble. Hope you like this.
Please write a comment if any of my words are wrong.
We are learning to do narrative writing. We got to chose a picture from pobble. Hope you like this.
Please write a comment if any of my words are wrong.
Monday, December 2, 2019
My awesome weekend recount
Hey Blogger,
We had to write a weekend recount. This is my one it is about my friends coming around.
This is my screen shot about it. I had a friend around and then the next day i had my cousin.
Can you see my friends name in the first paragraph?
We had to write a weekend recount. This is my one it is about my friends coming around.
This is my screen shot about it. I had a friend around and then the next day i had my cousin.
Can you see my friends name in the first paragraph?
Wednesday, November 27, 2019
My awesome story web
Hey Blogger,
I read a story called Spider Soup. I remember that there was a boy that had a pet spider and it was in the dish washer and there were two plates stuck together. He thought that his spider died but it was in the soup.
Then, we had to write the characters the setting, problem, actions and outcome. We did the characters first. Second We did the problem. Third we did the setting. Forth we did the actions then the outcome. I found the story web easy to finish.
Can you please read what the actions. How would you fell if your pet spider died?.
Can you please read what the actions. How would you fell if your pet spider died?.
Thursday, November 21, 2019
The old movie theata (on repeat)
Hey Blogger! We were learning about narrative writing. We are also learning about body words. There are heaps of body words so I will explain one. Alliteration. for example you repeat the same letter over and over 3 times. I will tell you another. Noun. It is a naming word like cat.
I chose to write about this pitcher because I like movies. My main character was Simon. The setting was at a building site.
Monday, November 18, 2019
what i learnt when i was on my blog scavenger hunt.
I learnt that my last photo was from Cameron or Leon.
I learnt that my name was Sonny.
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