I am a student at St Bernadette’s School.. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Wednesday, April 15, 2020
The Emmaus story
Hi bloggers, This is my post about the Emmaus story. My family watched the video for it this morning and I read the story. I hope you like the post! please comment.
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Hi Sonny, this is a stunning slideshow and I like how you captured the message. I also liked the detail you gave to each of your characters. Next time you might want to give an example of some of the stories that you mentioned in slide 20. Well done, Ka pai.
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Hi Sonny
ReplyDeleteThis is a great creative slide show you have made, How long did it take you to make?? I like how you made the characters. Tip for next time is to minimise your slides in between the talking of the characters. Keep up the good work.
Miss Rader
50 minutes. Ms Morgan told me to put 5 slides when someone is talking.
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